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Shoreline

Pick up the pieces, broken heart doves
fix them up pretty with lies and love
everyone I can't have I simply adore
and the one I love most, disregards all my sores.
You... you were my sun, my stars
my moon, my sea, but yet my scars
Find a island far from your reach
lover's comfort lay cool on a beach.
But even these hidden loves agree
searching for shorelines away from me
I'm a burnt soul, distant in your heart
once all you saw, now a star torn apart.
A diseased island torn and starting to burn
never understanding why the tide does not return
Those I pushed away, I completely adore
and the one who loves me I completely ignore.
You are my sun my stars, my whole embrace
I am the one thing in this earth that you can replace
And everyone I can't have, I simply adore
Everyone I ever loved, swept out from the shore.
Yes everyone I thought had once loved me
is searching for shorelines out in sea.

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  • illusive
    October 19, 2008
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    tragic yet beautiful

    i think i just found a favourite poem of yours. It's catchy to say out loud & it flows so nicely.

    I really like it, but gosh chipper up sulky face. Trust me if i had a boat i would only want to dock where you were.

    Listen i love you & your poetry...but the two of you seriously need to get a little more upbeat (regardless of how brilliant your sadness makes your poetry)