Hey there little guy, standing with
ears up high,
Wondering what I am doing
riding by.
My what a beautiful coat
of hair,
The reddish tint gives you such
a vivid flair.
Don't worry, I won't bother
you,
Happily, slowly I'm just
passing through.
Though I will admit you have
made my day,
I pray that this bright, lovely feeling
will forever stay.
Author notes
Hello dear Azlyn, I do hope this little write will put a litte light and warmth into your heart. 
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A contest entry
- a contest to lift up a friend, our Azlyn by michellemybelle.
1450 points, ended November 3, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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My sweet Puppy
...thank you from my heart!!!
Az
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HELLO AZLYN
Thank you for coming by to read!'s He is cute isn't he? I was riding on our big bike trail and there he was standing staring at me so I stopped, picked up my camera and snapped a pic.
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sweet!
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HELLO EA
Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading this one!
's He was cute! Just stood there while I rode up, picked up my camera and took a pic.'s
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Lovely light hearted write, sure to lift Azlyn's spirits. Thank you for your entry.
blessings,
Michelle
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HELLO MICHELLEMYBELLE
Thank you ever so much for stopping by and reading!'s Azlyn is a wonderful person and has always been here for me. I sincerely hope this poem will bring a sweet smile to her face.'s
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lovely
indeed it is.
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HELLO KRISTY
Thanks ever so much for stopping by to read!'s That little one was so cute standing there watching me.
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Wonderful write. I have seen many a deer at the side of the road and each time I am left in awe, funny how they do that. Thank you for sharing.
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HELLO JANURARYRAIN
Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading!'s I took this pic while riding my bicycle on a nearby bike trail. That little guy just stood there and stared while I picked up my camera and took a pic of him.'s
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I love to see through your eyes the visions are always precious and beautiful.
we all should do this, stop and see such loveliness that surrounds us
such beauty
God bless my friend...
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HELLO KATHLEEN
Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading this!'s I try to see the beauty that my parents always taught me how to see and notice. I see so much sadness and uncaring in the world around me daily and after a long day I just don't want to see people and their uncaring ways any longer, only the things that take all of this away from my mind.'s
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Outstanding
This poem is full of natural charm, I loved the whole concept of writing about a deer in the forest. I think this kind of poetry sees you at your best. Great choice of language and effortless flow. Best of luck in the contest.
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HELLO BETH
It sure has been a long time! Since you last stopped by I have bought my own computer and learned how to post pics!'s I now have one of me on my page if you care to see just what I look like, and the pic for this poem and most of my last ten or so are my own which I have taken over the years and lately.*happY Thanks so much for coming by to read this!
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Another lovely write Kevin!!
Really like the line "The reddish tint gives you such flair"
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HELLO JESAAN
Thank you ever so much for stopping by and reading this!'s Yes, that little guy that day just stood and watched me take my camera and take a picture of him.
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this is really nice grandad
i love you
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HELLO RHIANNA
Tdhanks ever so much my dear grand daughter! This little guy was just standing by the trail as I was riding by and I just had to stop and take a picture of him! 's
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Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!
I love it!! best of luck in the contest!!! Peace, Cyn
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HELLO CYNTHIA
Thank you ever so much for coming by and reading!'s I do hope this little write will cheer her up, this little guy is so cute!
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Wonderful bright and uplifting verse. To see beauty in natures creations is a gift from creation its self precious. Loved it!
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HELLO SUSEANN
Thannk you ever so much!'s I find that as I am out seeing animals and beautiful scenery I am so content and relaxed.'s
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nice write, i dont much like deer, been in too many accidents involving them, they do alot of damage lol. no really i do like deer, they are pretty animals, especially the babies
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HELLO SUE
Thanks ever so much for coming by to read!'s I have had many accidents involving deer also but they are beautiful and really are not all that wild if one just takes their time and slow down around them.
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Dear little deer
Were you riding your bike? You managed to get a real good shot here. Thank you for sharing Kev.
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HELLO JANICE
Thanks so much Janice!'s Yes, this is on a huge bike trail near home here. I actually had time to stop, stand up and pick up my camera and take this and all the while this little guy just stood and stared at me.'s
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Hi bro!! This is wonderful, I liked the first line it made me smile, calling it 'little guy' it provoks a peaceful and innocent image in the mind of the reader. I love how you always write about nature and happy things, it makes me so calm and bring out what's bothering me out.
Thanks for sharing this and bet of th luck in the contest, it was so kind of you to try and cheer someone up and on the way cheer so many as well.
~Noor
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HI SIS!
Thanks ever so much for coming by and reading this! I tried to think of something that would cheer up my friend and I thought of this picture. I try to write about happy things mostly as everyday so much around is sad and depressing. I am down a lot myself and I think I try to dream of happy and nice things.'s
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Aww! So sweet! I enjoyed reading this. Honestly, I am having a real bad day as well. Hehe, and this just made me smile So thank you. Just one thing though that you need to change..You've just made a typing error in the second last line. taht should be that. Great work! Good luck in the contest! And this should definitely cheer Azlyn up.
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HELLO YLOVA
Thanks ever so much!'s Then I am doubly happy for not only have I made one friends day a little better but anothers as well.
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