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if you want, you can ride a bike with square wheels.

The ocean soaks up the sun
draining the water colored sky.
A new beauty comes out,
the night.
A gaint star rises from the ground
and fills the night time sky
with a just right light.
Baby moons twinkle and dance in the sky
too bad there to high
...for me to grasp.
A gentle breeze comes out to play
but only for a while.
It cannot stay.
Cheer up,
the sun comes up
with a new sky.
White cotton candy swimming in the baby blue.
What a dream come true.

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  • joee-143
    January 30
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    wow , that is such a positive && happy poem! i lovers it! :

  • voldo
    November 28, 2008

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    I really loved your imagery of how the moon is a rising star... a giant star rising from the ground and how the stars are baby moons. Simple, but beautiful.

    I didn't get how the "if you want you can ride a bike with square wheel" came in though... maybe add a line saying that you can feel like you can do anything when seeing these things. Because I got the sense that you could only watch, not do everything (couldn't grasp the stars)


  • Handcuffs of Love
    October 17, 2008
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    Nice!!!!