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Satan's Cup

I crave for more
Though this cup is empty
For this brew
Is addicting

This cup, the cup of death
Drank by so many before
Does not have an affect on me
Sorry Satan, you have lost

My soul remains free
Among the humans, it lies
Though my taste buds crave this drink
I just keep walking

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  • new born
    November 15, 2008
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    Ooo, spooky. Longing to give into temptation, but knowing better and showing restraint. Nice!