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"Free Falling"

im spiraling down
            a[false] sense of happiness
etched on my heart

                      here i go comprimising
bits&pieces of myself

        for a boy i hardly
                know
"Free Falling, now im Free, Free fallin"

its a quite sort-of-day in my head
&&
"i wanna free fall out into nothing.
oh, im gonna leave this world for a while"

i don't know what else to do...
he's seeping under my skin,,
contaminating every nerve
                        every fiber
                        every pore
                                          of my being.
all thess thoughts are jumbled in the
back of my mind and i just can't shake the
feeling that he's going to break my ♥

"&all the bad boys, standing in
the shadows & the good girls
are home with broken hearts."

he's got me in his hand

          &&"now im Free Fallin,
                                Free Falling"

              into a figment of my imagination
                  a false emotion
                            thats claiming
                                  my ♥

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8.28.08

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  • endless-lover silver member
    October 21, 2008

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    contaminating every nerve
    every fiber
    every pore
    of my being.
    all thess thoughts are jumbled in the
    back of my mind and i just can't shake the
    feeling that he's going to break my ♥


    great write doll
    loved these lines for i can relate to them as for the time being. keep up the work cant wait to read more.take care and love much

    vanna


  • Menace
    October 18, 2008

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    Excellent babe! I see you still got the touch. You had a lot of mispells, but I forgive you. Stay awhile so I can have some of your words to slide across my teeth.


    • Crash Into Me
      October 20, 2008
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      hahahaha yes, it was a rushed effort. (library computer and all)
      :]

      love comment, it just sounds sexy.

      ♥ ♥
      [[alexsis]]