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Alone ( Single Cinquain Form )


how can
i say good bye
your life has just begun
a legacy we shall both now share
orphans


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  • Luciferschild
    February 10

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    it took me a couple of read but i ended up really liking this one, im tempted to try a cinquian myself. thank you for entering and good luck

  • piccola silver member
    January 28

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    this comes as a surprise at the end and kind of jolts the reader. So sad. great form. thank you for entering


  • Arkbear gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Hello Bill

     

    *good buy*....should be....*good bye *

     

    Lovely and sentimetal messge.....one which makes me pondwer.....God bless you for entering.....Bear ~


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      January 24

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      Arkbear

      Hi Bear, lovely to see you once again.
      Just a friendly little typo message for you hehehehe.

      You commented on *good buy*... should be ....*good bye*..
      well sweetheart you also have a little typo... *messge*.... should be....message lol lol.
      God bless you Bear for you are a truly beautiful soul and a most wonderful friend to know here on AP.
      Much happiness to you and your family,
      ~Anne~


      • Arkbear gold member
        January 24
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        Umm...I think I am correct on good bye.....see up there ...but yes, I did have a typo in my review.. (message) ..I am usually typing so quickly that I missssssss editing when judging contests...and I also spelled *ponder* incorrectly.....MISSED THAT ONE!!!

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