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I thought this love would never end,

that it would be me and you, forever.

I don't understand,

how could you think,

that when you walked away from me,

you were protecting me?
You were my breath, my destiny, my everything.

It's too late for me to forget you,

you have left a permanent mark on my heart.

I love you so much,

and I was so certain you felt the same,

please, I am begging you, come back;

don't leave this flower of yours to wilt.

My finger stretches across the scar on my hand,

do you remember that day?

That day when you saved me

from the fire within me.

That day you told me,

you would always be there,

to hold me.

The message you conveyed,

it seemed so true, so pure.

When did it become a lie?
When did you stop smiling at me,

and started frowning, instead?

When did you close the window of hope

for us that you always seemed to have?

What did I do so wrong,

that you felt the need to live without me?

I wish I could let you go,

but I am stuck here waiting,

waiting for you to return to me,

I don't want a new love,

I just want you.

So, now, I only have one question left for you,

is this our end; the Twilight of me and you?







Author notes

I used all the words.
~ Away
~ breath
~ Back
~ Destiny
~ forever
~ flower
~ Hold
~ live
~ mark
~ message
~ never
~ new
~ Question
~ same
~ Scar
~ smile
~ Twilight
~ Waiting
~ window
~ Wrong



This poem is inspired by the Twilight saga, written by Stephenie Meyer, it is based on an event that happened in the second book, New Moon.

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  • albinoblacksheep720
    December 1, 2008

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    Nice ending

    I like it. It shows Bella's feelings in a nice flowing way. I really like the last line. It was awesome. Great job Good luck


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    I absolotely adore twilight
    I think it's stupid she chose Edward tho... I was always a Jacob person

    Very nice use of the words, congratulations on using them all

    I wish you the best of luck,
    Claire x


  • Maili Knephthan Greeters member
    October 22, 2008

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    I have read the second book and this fits. I like how you used the wordbank to depict the character of Bella and how she loved and loves Edward. Thank you for entering