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in the end we will be together

If I knew the world was about to end, I’m positive of what I would do.
I would find a way to get to the one I love no matter what it took. I would want to see him on the last few days we had left.
We would watch the last sun set.
We would sit together for one final time and hold each other and not let go.
We would kiss passionately leaving the world behind.
We would tell our families how we loved them so.
I would tell him all the things I feel for him.
I don’t think we would go any where just stay were we are.
To me its not about where you are its who your with,
And I would want to be with him.
I know he would hold me close and say we will always be together
And I will have no doubts, with the sound of his southing voice
We would fade off to sleep
As time would simply vanish leaving us in each others arms forever,
And in the next life we would awake holding each other
As if a new day had been born.
We would always be together.

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  • Juno101
    July 6
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    such a romantic. I liked the poem, it was really nice to read. Wow, is this your latest poem.

  • mcfreeman
    October 24, 2008
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    Determination...is part of

    salvation

  • mz.butter
    October 22, 2008
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    very nice.

    a true love story.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Nicely written and I enjoyed this read! Thank you for your entry!


  • WolfHeart
    October 17, 2008

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    For some reason a big bucket of tears snuck right up on me. There is a lot of feeling in this gem. You spoke right to the reader's heart. I like this a lot and it reflects many of my own thoughts. Good work, sweetie!

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