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Cinquain

Crapsey
always more rules
no more than crosswords spent
cerebral stretching lost to words
Crap, see

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Counting syllables is something I abhor doing. No offense meant to the form (or any other such form), or those who use it or enjoy it, it's just not me.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Hello

     

    Presentation is a tad hard on the eyes......your ( 6 ) syll L is off by a syll.....thank you for joining me in this contest and supporting Poetry Formed.....God bless you,

     

     

    Bear ~

    • zorman32
      October 22, 2008

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      I tried, but thanks

      My computer has a weird monitor, so it's hard for me to tell sometimes...at times they want me to click "submit" and I can't even read what the text says. As far as syllables goes, I finger counted every line a few times and still got it wrong...that's why I don't like counting. Don't know what it is, I just can't seem to pull it off in any form for very long. Thanks for not being offended at the entry, and for the comment. I'll douse the (6) line.


  • butterflywriter
    October 18, 2008
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    lol, then don't do it...

    • zorman32
      October 18, 2008
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      I know...

      I sometimes have a sarcastic (very) sense of humor, glad it was a chuckle to somebody.