every time you pass me by
you can see it in my face
I'm blushing deep inside
as my heart begins to race
don't know if this is real
this is just how I feel
whatever this is I know
it's what you do to me
I'm falling head over heels for you
and there's nothing that I can do
to stop this feeling inside of me
for you see
I've never felt this way before
and I want this feeling to stay more and more
whether this is love
or a sign from up above
I could care less
about any other guy
you're the only one I want to impress
and I don't know why
but this is what you do to me
before you I didn't care
about the way I dressed
now everything must be perfect
every detail must be flawless
just so you'll notice me
don't know if this is real
this is just how I feel
and everybody knows
it's what you do to me.
Author notes
I wrote this for my first real love and boyfriend,
A contest entry
- birth of love by rosepoet.
400 points, ended November 19, 2008, 11 entries
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Aww, this is adorable. It is very much about a first love/boyfriend--all that newness "I've never felt this way before" and "There's nothing I can do to stop this feeling..." It reminds me of being 14 years old all over again... but you know, when I met my future husband in college, it was all just as new all over again. There's something so very pure and special about the first and last people you date. Excellent work, good luck in the contest. --Shannon
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Absolutely Awesome
Kristina this is great,
It almost puts the reader in the persons heart.
I've felt what you've felt when you wrote this before and it's an terrific feeling . Anyone whose ever felt this way ,and been crazy about someone will love this poem no matter in what way they were in love with them.
,good talking to you
Steve
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keep writing!
No matter what, let it flow from you. You are learning to understand you and your feelings. It is an exploration you will be doing for the rest of your life,
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You remind me of my cousin in writing style. She has like 300 poems but she won't post them online... maybe if she sees she's not the only one with this edge of writing she'll come..
This is a awesome poem and it says allot about the type of man your bf is.
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Very sweet and romantic
this is a really great poem, especially
I could care less
about any other guy
you're the only one I want to impress
and I don't know why
but this is what you do to me
thats the part i like...it shows him how much u love him -
Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!
Wishing you best of luck in the contest!! Peace 
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Wow...this is a very powerful poem. The emotion seeps out of every line. Good job, I like it
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wow. this is really amazing.... He must be a very special person for you to feel this way.... I love the way the lines flow together. and i like the last two lines.
and everyone knows
it's what you do to me.
cause its one thing if you can feel it, but when you have people backing up seeing how you react, it makes it that much more realistic
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sweet
As you feel your emotions for some one you like, just keep in mind first guy is like a test to your self esteem, keep sharing and make sure you keep your sight focused on what is right....
first is awesome, poem to share with him...good luck
Linda
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And he should feel proud you wrote it - your rhyme flows smoothly and you did an excellent job expressing love - very nice write
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A great write on falling in love.
Well done !!
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Welcome to AP This is a pretty good poem If you broke it down into 4 line stanzas it would help the flow keep penning and compeating thats how you get better LOL Bill
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Amazing...
I can fully relate to this.
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i love it
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