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Dissolution

ring.

not inclined to answer
fingers graze the keys

click. hello?

find myself
transfixed on the mockery
the inner hate coming out
'hello'
do you know
exactly
how to unnerve me?

i'd like to spend time
with a blank piece of art
only to find
you engulfed
in your own defecation

high school, dead
as you live in it
walking high
you're not finished

why should i be content
that at least i
know my own weakness?

in a loss of words
i am nothing more than bitter
no longer
does the child in me smile
when we cruise down
main street

hello?

do you know
how much i'd love
to slap you?
watching you go blind
right in front of me

friends until
our differences
intensify


Author notes

haha.

i could never say this to her
but thank you for the contest.
an excellent prompt.

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  • blondeoverblue
    October 19, 2008

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    Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest. I liked the interesting take that you took on the prompt. Good luck in your future writings.

    Kat