My nerves on end
My senses so keen
And its not a dream
This feeling, this feeling
You make me feel home
Make me feel whole
This love can't drift or die
I'm so entirely alive
Hold me, hold me
I can't let go
Kiss me, kiss me
I won't let go
So when it rains, I'll think of you
And when I'm alone, I'll think of you
I want to breathe you in
Have you all for me
Feeling you so close and near
So I can finally see
My heart beat sings a song
All I see is you
Then my sight floods in brilliant color
The world completely new
You are beautiful
Velvet starry skies
Sweetest, honey, kiss...
You are my life
So when it rains, I'll think of you
And when I laugh, I'll think of you
I'll pretend to hold you
Your heart pressed against mine
And I'll pretend to kiss you
Until our hands entwine
You filled my heart with light
You pulled out all the pain
So I'll think of you tonight
And wish for it to rain
A contest entry
- Twilight-The Safest Time Of Day by SingMeToSleep.
850 points, ended March 3, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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I love this.
I love the last stanza. Great write!
Thank you for entering and good luck. -
its raining -
wow. sweetie that made me cry. not many poems make me cry. memories and songs. but never poems. you have accomplised something no one has in the longest time. that last stanza reminded me of my first love. =\ and i dont like to remember him because him hurts. but this was amazing. so beautifully written. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ awesome write
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Thank you!
Thanks so much for commenting my poem I hope it wasn't a bad kind of crying, hahaha [english accent] But seriously, that's the first time anyone has ever said something so strong about my poetry. Thank you so much, dear <3
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