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Spritual Retreat

Missing image
Steamer left
chocked city
boarders bequeathing serenity
sky turned sea blue
All inclusive
Moved in unison
spiritual shore beckoning eyes.

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Venugopal
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  • spiritualangel
    November 6, 2008
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    Well expressed. Best of luck.


  • maralisa silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    a beautiful take on the promt dad your words give out a great depth of brevity and emotion good luck in the contest


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    I Like

    This is a simple but deep piece. I like the undercurrents of emotion throughout that I felt. Great write. Yours in poetry, gypsy

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