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Pirates' Prize


Fire across their bowsprit hag,
Commandeer them, fetch that swag!
Happily, we'll spare lives, too--
By Poseidon, we need crew!





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Valkyrie

A contest entry

Did you hear Geoffrey Rush (as Captain Barbossa) reading the poem?

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  • spiritualangel
    November 6, 2008
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    Well done. Best of luck.

  • henryjoe
    October 17, 2008
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    Certainly heard the pirates voice.

    Is needing a crew really a saving grace for the ships and crews they overtake?

    • Valkyrie
      October 29, 2008
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      Certainly! Would you rather be killed and tossed overboard?


  • who iam
    October 17, 2008
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    Pirates Prize- to capture this ship and all the booty within; a great take on the picture prompt.

  • copper29
    October 17, 2008

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    Haha- that was a fun poem. I loved the spirit in your words. Nice take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest

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