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No more

Night falls
No one calls
Alone again tonight
No more
My life's gone

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  • Lady Michaella
    October 17, 2008

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    This is quite unexpected.It was like Staccato in a piece of music- Short and detached, but i love it this way. It is scary and portrays many types of darkness, i thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
    -RoseDaughter-