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She who Moans within the Night

There she lies bare
resting in her dark slumber
embracing the black covers
that wrap around her so delicately
words she mumbles
silent and unknown
to who listens
whispers she hears
only to feel her head
with the thoughts of her peers

I await in the corners
of her room
prying in on such beauty
legs so soft and elegant
neck pulsing with
those blue veins
promising the everlasting
blood which flows through
the heart that beats
within her breast
moves so vibrant as
she take those sober breaths

Why must I be damned
by such a gorges corpse
that lies before me
masquerading coldly into
gothique be-loving sights

Lips so smooth
tiring of the death
that eats her slowly away

Just a touch
or scent of her brunette hair
would satisfy my
antagonizing lust for her

I move in closer
hovering over her
restless body
gazing secretly
examining her like
a rare jewel
something magnificent
and unbound to ones eye

Deep inhaling breaths
I steal from her neck
Tears of sweet sweat
running down into
the crevasses of her
dimpled pores

 

I rise screaming in the dark

only where I can be heard

Ah, such a damnable goddess

one which she may die

Only which she can die

she has to die

For I will go insane

if this creatures lurks

among the shadows of

the ratcheted earth

of tainted souls

as which of as mine

 

I glide my hands over her body

inches away at which she may resist

She doesn't move

she lifeless as it seems

so peaceful looking

I wonder when she dies

will she have that

same peaceful look

as she did before

 

I want her blood to flow

onto these unstaind covers

I want to hear her plead

and beg for mercy

as she did to my heart

I want her to feel my pain

and love I have for this winch

 

ha...hahaahhhhhhaah

I can't help but laugh

at this novel

that just waiting to be written

 

She opens her eyes

seeing me holding my head

insanely trying to force these

damn thoughts out

but they stay

 

She rises up ready to scream

at this unknown stranger in her room

I leap foward pouncing on top of her

So breakable...

Her muffled but silent screams

filled the room

so faint...

to ones ears

 

I kiss her neck as passionalty

I can, trying to show my undying love

She kicks and screams

She doesn't love me!

She doesn't love me!

I cry onto her shirt

pouring down like water

making it so wet

 

I scream at her deaftly

Why don't you love me my child?!

Why must you resist?

Just stay with me...

 

she bites my hand

making me release her

Tripping and falling

trying to get to her bedroom door

I grasp her leg just in time

hitting her head onto the wooded floors

 

I take her throwing her

onto the bed

she whines uncounciously

I take my knife and slice her

across my throat

If you can't be mine, then no one can have you!

she gags

blood flowing out of her mouth

trying to catch those lifes breaths

I pick her up and start to dance

to such beautiful music

I hear no more cries

I hear no more breaths

She dead she's finally dead

my lover

 

Blood flowing onto my clothes

so madnificent....

I drop her eroticly onto the floor

She dead now I have no use for her

Now its time for me to go

and find the blonde

who tore me apart.

 

 

 

 

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  • Sara Khan
    September 7
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    wow...what a piece of poetry!


  • The odd one
    April 7
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    Oh boy. That was amazing. If I could write like you..oh I wish.


  • Emperor Azrael
    February 21
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    Awesome poem

    You are such a great poet, I wish I could write like you.


  • blackfang4318
    February 21
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    wow

    this poem is awsome and well wrote out and dark on so many levels i like this poem so far

  • Wow. Fucking magnificent. I loved it. Really crazy. like me.

  • Cloudwatcher
    October 31, 2008

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    Getting into the mind of a crazy killer, seeing some of their thoughts and unable to do anything about it while reading. Scary stuff with some backstory I am thinking upon, making me wonder exactly what she did to him before. Then this crazy needyness, so extreme. Nice writing.

    • Wings of Insanity
      October 31, 2008
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      She never did anything to him, it was just her beauty, that he fell inlove with, the facination of her skin, the lust he felt for her when she slept.

      You know whats actually sad, i just read back over this...and i see so many mistakes...makes me sick kinda. I would fixed them...but i don't really have the patice right now.


  • Boxingboy
    October 17, 2008

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    also sis next time right not good for little brothers

    that got me feelin awkward sis because i'm like as pure as can be and a picturer so i gave a good imagination and can't turn it off and on so yeah please next time put not for little brother's please

  • Boxingboy
    October 17, 2008
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    IF YOU DON'T HAVE SOMETHING NICE TO SAY DON'T SAY IT AT ALL................night angel you fucking horses ass liker

    ALSO on October 17
    YOUR THE FIUCKING BITCH FOR BEING AN IDIOT AND JERK TO A FIEND

    I HOPE YOU ROTT AWAY BECAUSE YOUR SO NOT WANTED WITH YOUR COMMENTS

    IF YOU DON'T HAVE SOMETHING NICE TO SAY DON'T SAY IT AT ALL


  • Boxingboy
    October 17, 2008
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    hey night angel

    THIS NOT FUCKING PIRACY

  • night angel
    October 17, 2008

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    this it piracy, you copied it u bitch
    this is copied from somewhere, i dont know where but im damn sure you copied this

    • Wings of Insanity
      October 20, 2008
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      Piracy, hmp...ha...makes me laugh. No honey I'm so very sorry I don't do piracy....thats bad, and that makes me look bad, and my work look bad. Nasheili, please just stay the fuck off my damn page, don't get mad cause your writing can't even touch my work. So stop being a bitch who whines and pisses in her damn pants, cause she can't put another person down like me lol, and put a fucking smile on you damn face.

      Cherrio,
      Misa

      and if you do find this poem report it to the Greeters or people your suppose to tell about piracy, other than that...Go fuck yourself as usual.lol.


  • kitty23
    October 17, 2008
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    Y

  • kitty23
    October 17, 2008

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    Omg who is that about it's really good
    i love it
    What made you write it
    omg good write
    very good
    LOVE ALWAYS KITT


    • Wings of Insanity
      October 20, 2008
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      Oh, catilyn I was just writing to be writing,lol. thats all....plus a porno kinda inspired me lol.

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