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The hues of sunset
Flee before gentle shadow
Stars gleam in the lake

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I decided to challenge myself a bit and also make this a haiku.

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  • Lady Michaella
    October 17, 2008
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    I loved this. My favorite lines were the first two, because they seemed like they matched each other, the last line seems to stand out, in a bad way, for some reading it kills the flow for me, but dont be down, this was an excellent poem. Thanks for entering
    -RoseDaughter-