We sailed the mighty oceans
our backs against the wind.
Risking all...
longing for adventure
and brothers to the end
Author notes
davidwright
A contest entry
- 20 words Contest PIF Quickie..Picture Prompt ..54th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
525 points, ended November 6, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful. Best of Luck.
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Visions
Many picture pass through my mind as i read this. A short poem but a long adventure.
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Amazing. You described the connection between people very well in just four lines. I admire your talent for fitting so much in so little words. good job. ~Hollis
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Well done.
You've said a lot in a very few words.
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So true david, so true. Brothers to the end. Well said, my friend.
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A true adventurer with a sense of wonder!
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Powerful words condensed in just 20 words!
Best of luck with the contest!
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Twenty words packed with action, adventure, discovery, risk and camaraderie. Good one!
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Very nice. It's all or nothing and us against the world. Good take on the prompt and good luck in the contest
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