The first love is not always puppy love,
there is only one unique love story,
a genuine emotion,
a love that will live in your heart
everlastingly.
The very first kiss
that you will remember.
Time when you make love
with passion and emotions
could be born only once.
The splendor ...
And nothing will be
before and after.
Order doesn’t matter,
sequence doesn’t matter
Age doesn’t matter,
nothing but your awareness
of your first and last love.
Author notes
I wanted to say these words that way, but I was at loss, My dear Sonja molded it her magical way and here it is exactly what I meant and felt.
I would like to thank my friend Rifat Cimen for the beautiful photo I am using in the background.
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Beautifully Penned
Thank you for entering my contest...novy
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A very well written piece I agree with you It dosen't matter when where or how just remembering is all that matters.
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oh this reminds me of someone specia to me
lolz. beautifuly done. thanx for entering and good luck!
*hugs* tay/tess.
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Yes nothing should matter when two people join in harmony to create beautiful love between them. First love can be very beautiful or a disaster, depends on situation. Like it could be love for one, and not the other. When it does happen that two are of the same mind, now that's something to be cherished. Oh by the way, I liked your poem. Well written.
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SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!!
You know my very first love was in the second grade and everyone in school, our school mates and teachers always thought as we grew we would be together always.
Alas! it was not to be , I guess God has something in store for me but the road is rough.'s
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My Dearest Kevin Thank you
I only have problems with my computer at home that i will fix soon. well yes, i wanted to say these words, but to me first love isnt always the first in number, it could be the 100th but the only one you will really cherish and remember even after feelings are gone
you do not keep it, sometimes you do of course and it goes on in a union, but there is always certain feelings that you cherish and a certain time you cherish in your heart whether you still have feelings or different feelings for the person
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