orange loss dances naked branches
silent park
a whithered stark field to swallow
poetry gave her today
silken-wrapped inward
toted in her satchel
autumn leaves
hiding from earth
hanging tight to carried bag
it leaks from ripped stitching
onto cement sidewalks
and follows her around
Author notes
Thanks for the chance to collaborate, Renee, such an honor
In a list
A contest entry
- Collaborate with me... by poetryality.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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How marvelous. Congratulations to you both, Rich & Renee. 
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such a beautiful poem. sigh!
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this is really awesome
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I am bowled over poet. I am sure I know who you are and wonder if this is your talented hand in the graphic art work that adorns this page? The visual art of your words is beautiful and familiar as well.
I love what you've done here. I am in awe! Thank you for the opportunity to collaborate with a billiant wordsmith. It has been my pleasure. I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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beautiful!
Two masters collaborating...so cool...This is beautifully done, my dear as always
Lynda
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