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aspire

huddled as one, our souls can't
escape the earth of creation
or calm seas unless we soar in
vapor skies

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20 words

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  • spiritualangel
    November 6, 2008
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    Beautiful. Best of luck.


  • penman gold member
    October 23, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a great choice of 20 words. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • who iam
    October 17, 2008
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    A serene vision of a transformation seen by ones own soul!
    Well done

  • copper29
    October 17, 2008

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    Awesome imagery. I loved "our souls can't escape the earth of creation" and "vapor skies." Interesting take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest