poetry gave her today
silken-wrapped inward
toted in her satchel
wondrous firm
with warm delight
a smile
it leaks from ripped stitching
onto cement sidewalks
and follows her around
wanting mothers attention
too busy to care
roses, personal and sweet
Author notes
It was so much fun the first time I had to try it from another angle!
A contest entry
- Collaborate with me... by poetryality.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments welcome
Comments
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Oh...I really love what you did with the form. This is what I had in mind. Our words seem to compliment each other. Very nice! I adore the sentiments that were chosen to highlight your prompt portion. Beautiful!
Thank you for the time spent to collaborate with me. It has been my pleasure! I wish you well in the contest.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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