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Agony





Blood dries off
leaves in darkness
a sigh moves away
terror penetrates me.


















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Prompt: DARK
13 words

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  • Lady Michaella
    October 17, 2008
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    This is very dark. I felt the pain and emotion here, it was excellent.
    -RoseDaughter-