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Never-Ending Love


I saw you the other day
knew it for sure
that we were meant to be
I wanted to be yours


show me that you feel
console me with love
show me nothing less
except all the above


loving you so truly
keeps my heart alive
thinking about you
helps me survive


I feel my heart beat
In your rhythm of life
makes me dream
About being your wife


I sleep with dreams
so vivid and clear
thinking about you
I have not a fear


Imagining you smile
Lights up my day
Sets me dreaming a while
And you...I portray


To be so near you
and yet so far
displeases my hope
that shines like a star


I wish too much
that causes my sorrow
thats all I have
thats all you can borrow


To feel your pain
Is my dream
To engage in your activities
Is another wanted extreme


I speak the truth
I love with my heart
I remain forever yours
My love is my art



Author notes

I hope i got through to the people who's lovers are far away from them..
this is from my heart..i hope it reaches yours !
much love,
Anagha-Nataraj

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    February 4
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    Wow, thanks for your entry and good luck in my contest lots of love...


  • Chocoholic156
    January 20
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    Really long poem, really small card. Thank you for entering.


  • Trill - Trickle
    January 20
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    Good! very picturess

    Keep up the fantastic work!

    ~ Trill


  • Dragon24
    January 20

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    i loved your piece, but i couldn't find a corus or verses. maybe if you change it some you could still have it entered. ok?

    • Anu-Nataraj
      January 20
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      i think ill withdraw my poem from ur contest...
      coz....i reli don wanna change it......its one of my MOST heartfelt poems !!

      thank u again dear friend,

      ~Anagha~


  • Sunkissed xo
    December 10, 2008

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    This is a very sweet and tender write that goes straight to the heart. You write with a gentle passion and lots of vivid emotion. This was a delight to read, thanks for entering the contest

  • Vera Rich
    November 20, 2008

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    Sorry - you seem to have misunderstood the requirements of my competition - it was for poems about Poetry and/or poets. I wish you luck with this poem, elsewhere - but as far as the "Celebrating poetry and poets" competition is concerned, I do have to say "No".


  • ChaingangAngel
    November 15, 2008
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    Amazing

    I loved this write! It was very Beautiful. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck to you

  • Maninblack
    November 6, 2008

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    Beautifully expressed

    I must have felt like that once but it's hard to remember what with me being so old. If I ever did feel like that I wonder what I did about it ahh I remember now, I married the woman.


  • DawnKestrel
    November 4, 2008

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    Amazing! I love the rhyme.
    Good luck in my contest!


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 31, 2008

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    Oh My!

    Such passionate words from one so young! 'Guard well your heart, for it is the wellspring of life'! This is a Proverb. Well written & with the heart & feelings of a much older young woman! All the best with this in the Contest. Nice flow, timing, word choice & rhyme! Love the way you ended this!

    I speak the truth
    I love with my heart
    I remain forever yours
    My love is my art

    Truly romantic! I can identify & so can all the other romantics.


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    October 20, 2008

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    Hi Anagha, this is a wonderful write you have penned here, I certainly know now that you have a wonderful heart that can love someone, cos loving is your art and you are the master of it, wow! that line is so amazing! the last ine I mean.

    Thanks for sharing this, it certainly has penetrated my heart!

    Love and light,
    Lencio


  • Travel Notes
    October 17, 2008

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    you have definately touched my heart with this. i can tell you truly mean every word and the rhyming makes it all the sweeter. thank you for entering and i wish you the best of luck.

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