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Void

I see only
this awful dark.

Black and ashen,
the death of art.

A contest entry

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  • Lady Michaella
    October 17, 2008

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    This is also, really great. It gets right into the point, and the rhyming is perfect. I love how its still in stanzas, instead of just a heap of words everywhere. It flows perfectly and is great. Thanks for entering this!
    -RoseDaughter-