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Dancing Wings

Here, in green meadows blowing winds,
where "Wind River," flows, turns and bends
wisdoms whispers float on zephyr's breeze
through wood line valley's tall forest trees.

Singing skies playing life in melodies.
Mountain still water tarn calm serenities
reflect timeless destiny's mirrored eyes
on moccasin trails across cerulean skies.

Wild horses run and true hearts are free
truth sings of trust, in dreams you see
warmth of mornings rising sun you feel,
nature's perpetual souls are forever real.

Listen to "Wind Rivers" echoed songs
where journey's rest and heart belongs.
Under heavens stars, sacred spirits sing
and believers, here, fly on "dancing wings."

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  • Sandygram
    October 19, 2008

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    Beautiful Poem!

    Oh the imagery in your words is so stunning!!!!!!!I enjoyed reading this from beginning to end. Great rhyme and flow to. Loved the last verse the best. Thanks for sharing your talent.

    Take care,
    Peace and Love,
    Sandy
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  • Painted Nails
    October 18, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL!! Is there any way I can bookmark this?!?! Wonderful, absolutely amazing! great job! Thanks for entering and good luck!
    Sydney


  • maralisa silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    a brilliant take on the promt I love your poem
    aw wow what a delightful poem your imagery is beautiful your creative metaphors paint nature at its best


  • kearbear19
    October 17, 2008

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    beautiful poem
    i love the nature references you use

    and wow that's awesome what you do with wood, i saw the pictures on your profule, that's amazing!


  • A63-Angel
    October 17, 2008

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    nice one, dad! this picture is beautiful and this is a very good write. best of luck in contest!!

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