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You & Them = Three

Only felt it twice
You and Them.

Two n' a half
women.

So many questions to ask
inner self I am silenced.

Is it lust of something
I can no longer have?

Or...

Is it still love
I had?

It wasn't even shared
time just wasn't there.

But here they are
with importance of...

Questions I must brave
to ask.

But know...

To me you
are still beautiful
even in silence.

Author notes

Hard getting left out of a life that once was shared. Almost gave up alot in my life for the love of one. Lucky I am that others are still here.

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    wow

    can't help but agree with the comment below..you my man are not only a great writer but also someone who
    is not afraid to be open about who he is, especially when it comes down to writing about matters of the heart..that's not easy to do!


  • csmmoms2
    October 17, 2008
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    Lovely

    Very personal write from a man known as Mr. Pickle.