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To say fourty - fourty times

Say the number fourty
Ova and Ova again

Say it nice and loud now
Then write it with your pen

fourty fourty fourty
Afte a little while it sounds a little naughty

Funny figure fourty
is a funny 40 shorty

Author notes

Hey there!

A note from the mommy!
We were driving in the car when Annie decided to show me how she can count aaaallll the whay up to fourty.

So when we came to the 40's she started to giggle. and she got stuck on the number. She said, "Listen mommy, the number sounds silly if you say it allot."
And there a new poem was born.

...while she forgot to finish the counting.

...

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  • JUDGED!!

    Hahahaha...
    This is very different and unsuspecting,
    wonderful take on the prompt poet, all the best in the contest.

    Ken

  • This is adorable, aha. And it really does sound funny.. I love how kids notice the smallest of things. (:

    -- Tor


  • Amera gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    haha! I actually tried this. My tongue got twisted.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Topnotchsy
    October 30, 2008

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    Haha, love it. I'm 21, but I guess I haven't "grown up" much yet. My type of humor. Nice job here. Keep up the reading and writing!!


  • penman gold member
    October 24, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Oh my you sure did use forty words. Very funny and well done. Thank you for sharing.

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