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Which came first?




Was it a chicken that first came,
Or was it an egg as some would claim?
Since both were made by God,
I don't think it would be odd
If the chicken became alive
With the egg already inside.



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  • Copy
    November 5

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    I won't lie.

    I'm not a fan of the which came first chicken and egg theme.
    But... this was very nicely penned, and I admire the way you think.
    Thank you, and good luck!


  • Antebellum
    July 19
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    wow never thought of it that way.

    [If you believe in the bible, the chicken came first, bcause God created animals so both chicken and rooster would have been created and the chicke laid the egg, but if you dont believe then you could say there had to be a chicken to have an egg so the egg came first]
    lol I like this.
    thanks for entering.


  • ItaloEtkin
    April 8
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    ha witty


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    November 24, 2008

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    hahahaha And thus endeth that debate! This is really cute. Thanks so much for entering my contest!

    PS: I agree with you.


  • suseann
    October 19, 2008
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    Ha! Well.. it appears you've solved that age old question quite well. Witty verse you have here.


    • Lionheart
      October 29, 2008
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      Thank You my dear friend. Miss you alot.
      Richard

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