each time you strike.
a long note screams from my mouth.
every bruise you make upon my skin.
grows in to a large black note head.
until body and life is just one sad symphony.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired 50 words or less by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended October 18, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is great! i look forward to reading more of your work. keep writing, you have talent!
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wow, powerful and short. i wish i could of read more, but i also really like it just how it is.
great job. -
Sad yet beautiful.
This is wonderfully done thank you for you
entry in my contest.
Delila
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Love the metaphore behind this write sis,
alot said in a few words
Good luck in the contest
All the best
Ken
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