Mommy what happened?
How did you change so fast?
I thought that you were different
but that image didn't last.
You used to be so perfect
in my eyes alone.
Tell me what has changed you,
in these years I've grown.
Your sweet demeanor,
now bitter and cruel,
my epic failure
is your fires fuel.
The booze have warped you
into this person I despise.
It kills me to remember..
and just to look into your eyes.
Mommy what happened?
How did you change so fast?
I thought that you were different
but that image didn't last.
A contest entry
- Write about a person. by samantha jean.
600 points, ended October 31, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It really is hard when someone changes and must be especially hard when they change because of something like alcohol.
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This is very powerful and I can relate to the subject matter so much.
Amazing job, thank you for the entry in my contest, and good luck. -
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This poem is very touching! And I understand what your going through!
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