You don't need me,
But I need you,
Please don't cast me out,
I beg you.
The earth could move,
Displacing us both,
And I would search the world,
Seeking you.
It makes no sense,
Why I find you so enthralling,
It seems deep and meaningful,
Everytime I see your face.
Pictures put into words,
The things I love and hate,
And I love you so much,
I hate you.
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lmao That guy doesn't seem to get it, but oh well. That's what you get for not having a stereotypical relationship with me. See? See? At least I know if I kicked you out again, you'd understand it is out of love.
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Jerk.
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uhm...
You don't need me,
But I need you
that's the definition of unrequited love--intentional or not -
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No. This piece is not about unrequited love. I could give you the background work on this story, but I can safely assume you would either (1) try to use the information to 'make fun of' or (2) not understand the situation at all because you would not understand the concept or the way I live.
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unrequited
love you/hate you--it's been said. for new poetry to captivate it must say something that HAS NOT been said. and this is all the same sad shit -
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You're not very tactful are you. Everything has already been said before. It's how you try to incorporate it into something else is what makes it different. Although this is not one of my better works, I would suggest if you want to give advice, give advice, don't be an ass. Oh, BTW, this is not about unrequited love.
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awww......
Touching the topic of love and hate such a fine line between them I like how you tread it.
The earth could move,
Displacing us both,
And I would search the world,
Seeking you.
Those lines just punched me in the face, thanks for shareing I wouldnt change a thing
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