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Back To You

When you see me on the streets
please just walk away
when you whispher my name
please don't let me hear
I don't wanna know your gossip
I don't wanna hear your lies

I'm bleeding here
and it comes back to you
you're laughing at this
little broken heart
so now I'm bleeding here
and it comes back to you

but I don't wanna do this anymore
giving you satisfaction you don't deserve
as you kill me slowly
ripping apart my soul
I'll take that in mind
and come back to you

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  • Unknowing...
    October 17, 2008

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    oh my gosh...i was speachless for a bit there...i love this very much it reveales an ugly truth that people dont wish to belive in a new perspective...one that most people dont think about

  • Judith Chandler
    October 17, 2008

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    That's is so hurtful when you are going through bad times and some think of it as just another juicy piece of gossip.


  • Janice M Pickett
    October 17, 2008
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    Thank you for this. You poets have so much talent. This contest is going to be very hard to judge.


  • Tyl3r
    October 16, 2008
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    I'm sorry.