Wretched bitch
venom spilling tramp
Lies and deceit
spill from lips of heat
Cold hearted whore
a fucked up trick
thief and con artist
you get me pissed
Tried to take
all that was mine
Damaging relationships
with your loose lips
I've done had it
believing and forgiving
Your on your own ho'
its time for you to go
One true fact I hold
I shall take you down
I don't give a fuck
I'll run you down with my truck
spread your funky ass
from sidewalk to parking lot
watch your blood spill out
as I repeatedly curse and shout
"No good bitch,
filthy whore
You've done your deed
and now exist no more.
My eyes will twinkle
my lips will curve
Has evil claimed me,
or did I gain some nerve?
A nurse to assist
instead you damaged
Words of happiness don't exist
I'm now on my rampage.
I will rip you
from asshole to elbow
Watch you beg
to be let go.
How does it feel
to be forced to die?
oh this is so real
I'm not you, I don't lie
Layer by layer
I will peel away
until your left emptier
then you made me today!"
Ruthless bitch, It's your turn
I will slice out your tongue
Watch your image burn
now whose having fun?
Whose laughing?
Are you?
Whose gasping?
it's not I turning blue.
Goodbye you no good slut
you will never tear me down
In the end the doors will shut
and there will only be...you and I
In a FINAL SHOWDOWN
Author notes
A contest entry for:
Hatred at it's best.
I hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by Rejected Easter Egg 650
YEA someones gotten me this pissed, but more so, I am hurt beyond repair. I would never wish harm on anyone. Even this one, but being able to yella nd shout in words makes me feel good.
A contest entry
- Hatred at it's best. by Rejected Easter Egg.
1080 points, ended October 25, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Oh go on! Tell it like it is
This is wonderful and expressive, totally passionate and well worth writing!
Fantastic therapeutic poetry!
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DAMN! Ya think ya might be going a little too easy on her?
I never ever want to piss you off.
Great write-scary read
Ilove you.
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Wow! I promise I will try to never piss you off. Can I send this to Allan's girlfriend?
Love,
Amera♥
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AMAZINGLY INTENSE
Such power, such rage.
Awesome.
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A very very powerful write sis!! You did a wonderful job with this piece!!Excellent job expressing your feelings!!This is truly incredible!! Your words and lines are magnificent!! You truly did an amazing job!! I love it!!
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wow these are very strong words I would not want to be the person they are meant for, they must have done something to really cause a problem. If so they aren't worth you getting in trouble over .
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From primeval perseverance you could take anyone down.
The decision to stand and give what is required shows guts more than some can show, and boy did you show them.
A real piece of mind, given in the best style and easily understood. Thank the lord it ain't me...
now when you laying her flat, let me carry the trophy back for you...you gonna take this down aswell..
go you......
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Yeow!!! Maybe I should try this...
Rant and Roll, girl!
I'm mad someone hurt you so bad. Let me at her!!!
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Damn bunnies didn't work GRRR lol
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Good riddance to rubbish I say hun!!!! That sure is some vent and I bet she deserved it!! GO you!!! I know who's winning that showdown!!
Love you
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she did try and almost succeeded
but in the end, I shall
I love you too My kiwi,
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Not with me should didn't succeed.. I know a 'ho when I see one!
Always got your back honey!
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jesus...
i'm a little scared now
that must have been really cleansing
you let it flood and flow nicely
more than just a rant this
had some real poetic flavor
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OMG!!!!! DID I SCARE YOU???Well good
Just dont piss me off honey and all will be dandy.
Sheltered isnt really scared
for he can tame the best
Im just venting without care
so maybe I can rest
So come here sheltered dear
and lay your fear aside
Passions isnt one to fear
shes always on your side
s
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excellent...
you will make a fine body guard
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WOW! I hope I never make you mad girl! lol
Wonderful rant you made here. It sure does
feel good to let it all out. Sometimes it's
a bit safer to actually write out all of your
angry emotions like this. As long as you don't
keep them bottled up very long and remember to
find a way to release them later on. Good luck
to you with this one!
Jeremy0826
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You never make me mad, but that avatar GRRRRRRRRRRR Thanks for your ongoing support I appreciate it and you.
Love
Tory
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