Today discovered
we live in abstract,
not a lie to fool
sadness
unhappiness
love or suffer
who can play ?
As thought tries to breathe
heart falls, sees, feels
moments of
abstraction
fantasy
reality.
Short or long questions
answers contained sirens.
Author notes
Prompt: Abstract Moments
40 words
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 to 40 words #13 by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very interesting! The closing line through me for a moment, but I read it a few time and began to understand...does the question really matter or is it the answer we get to life's questions...creative and thought provoking...nice job...
thank you for entering!
mystic
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