The crooked tree sways
as wild horses gallop by
rain begins to fall
as leaves melt instantly
on the soiled ground
clouds turn black
as Zeus raises his mighty hand
throwing endless thunder bolts
lighting up the midnight sky
Author notes
30-40 Words
Prompt: Abstract Moments
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 to 40 words #13 by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well done. A great choice of words. Best of luck in the contest.
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Nice look and mythology and well written for the direction you took...creative and deep...well done...
thank you for entering!
mystic
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