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Silken and Softness

Leaving a trail
Where two babies,
Can be found.

Found by a stranger
Returned to the parents.
By tracks on the ground.

A contest entry

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  • poetryality silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    Now, add my portion to yours, and we have actually collaborated. LOL

    Take a look at the other entries, there are some entrants who get what I'm looking for here.

    Good Luck!



    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • crimsondew
    October 16, 2008

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    Good continuation...you might want to add the stanzas you are collaborating for more effect..just a suggestion..
    Tale care and All the best!