poetry gave her today
what appeared lost yesterday;
silken-wrapped inward
toted in her satchel;
brimming full of emotion.
it leaks from ripped stitching--
onto cement sidewalks
and follows her around.
a shadow of expression--
lengthening with life's journey,
widening with lessons learned
along the way...
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FINISH THIS:
poetry gave her today
silken-wrapped inward
toted in her satchel
it leaks from ripped stitching
onto cement sidewalks
and follows her around
By: Poetryality
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A contest entry
- Collaborate with me... by poetryality.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good job
You have a good mind for your writting...mac
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I love this Bunny, the shadow of expression...congrats to you...
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I love the first lines here, they speak to and from my spirit. Then, the poem carries the reader on a journey that ends in "lessons learned".
Breathtaking and surreal!
You have given such beauty to the words I had written by adding yours well chosen, eloquently writtenwords. I love this! Thank you so much for collaborating with me. The best to you in the challenge. Simply Beautiful!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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nicely done
the journey we call life
my legs are getting tired
better get on the bus
before I get hit by it
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