toiling with emotions
felt deep to her soul
pressing forth on concrete hesitations
what remains solid
within her psyche
beauty within penned pleasures
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Collaborate with me... by poetryality.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Now, add those lines to mine somehow, and collaborate with me. LOL
Take a look at the other entries, especially the one(s) in the Finalists' List.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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beauty full
short and deep...
sometimes it's difficult to write
and often the reader has no idea
how much time and effort
is put into a piece,
leaving with a lack of appreciation
for what could dramatically change their life
with a simple extra second of thought.
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hmmm. short and simple.
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