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Abstract Moment

It's hard to consive
To take in a moment
What the eye sees
The brain can hold
A mouth will say
Where the bom's engaged
And fools don't complain.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    LOL...I often feel it is the fools that complain but about the wrong things...not the things of importance...well done and I love the closing line...
    thank you for entering!
    mystic


  • crimsondew
    October 16, 2008
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    last line hit it!!
    good write for the prompt..All the best dear!