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Irrevocable

Iterum from moment to next
these lips long for your kiss
as julep for humbled essence
authentic and convinced

Of beauty's certain existence
found in folds beyond flesh



I am bound to belief
that our love is not hearsay
gathered by lonely concerns

But rather that it shines
of destiny's constant light



Never to be undone

 

 

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 17, 2008

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    Thank You for Entering

    well this is a very nice well penned poem you have written here. there is soemthing about love poetry that awakens the heart of one and well thus poetry from the heart is produced. any ways just a very well penned poem. good work and good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    So beautiful!! You sure know how to write love poems bro!!


  • BloodyThorn
    October 16, 2008

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    Very Interesting Great peice not to long but the words are enough to conpinsate for it all in all a talented expression of language.


  • Canadamomma
    October 16, 2008
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    I love this; great language usage....
    Thought provoking