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We are like the river who intends to unleash it's passion running wild our love is to strong of a tide to give into the wind is fast to change it's mind is made up directional patterns confuse the free spirit inside my mind unwinding like a path down the wrong tunnel I spiral out of control is not the way I like to feel

The fire building inside of me is releasing it's fury with lust for others on the break of dawn I speak your name to the Earth be still with your presence is warm and giving of love to be with you is gentle like clouds to break my fall I have already done for you

Speak my name to the mountains will know with the world that you are the keeper to my soul not searching for another mate will never match me like the sun you send my way to warm me the rest of my days

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  • transcendental baby gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    There is lovely sense of soft breezes blowing through these words linked together by meaning and not grammar ... kind of a seamless timelessness that drifts through the brain with something warm and refreshing. Really lovely


    • Junebug-
      November 1, 2008
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      I love to write like this... sometimes it releases more. It is not thought out, planned or anything of that sort. It is just let out like a scream from the top of a mountain.
      Sarina is warm and refreshing since this is about her I would hope it to reflect that.

      THANK YOU for the amazing compliments!