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Count On Me

It seems everyone's falling down these days,
And you're just one of many on that list.
But, girl, you gotta get right back up
Because to me, in this ocean, you're the coolest fish!

I understand that love gets tough,
And sometimes you just don't think you're gonna make it through,
But just keep on holding on tight to what you believe in,
And remember that I'm always here for you.

You're stronger than you think,
And I know that you can do this.
You just need some time is all,
And then you'll decide what's right, I promise.

Things always get worse before they get better,
But I know they'll go up right after they go down.
You can wait for her, or you can find someone better,
But either way, the light is going to come around.

You just gotta listen to your heart,
And I know you'll be alright.
Because you're an amazing person, an awesome friend,
And we still have to make those cookies one of these nights!

You're going to smile again, just you wait,
You just need to keep your head up, and you shall see
That life's just a game, and you have to play.
But don't worry, hunny, you can count on me!

Author notes

For my friend Danika! She's going through some love problems right now, and I just wanted to write this to let her know she's gonna be just fine, and that she's always got me to lean on and stuffs! xD I love you, Danika! You're the shit!

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  • Emerald-Spirit
    October 21, 2008

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    This is one of the best poems I have read. Think it's because it really touched me and it gave me some hope. The flow is also amazing. xds-gx


  • Unknowing...
    October 16, 2008

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    i love this soooo much. i think it sounds perfect!
    i especially like this part:
    "I understand that love gets tough,
    And sometimes you just don't think you're gonna make it through,
    But just keep on holding on tight to what you believe in,
    And remember that I'm always here for you."

    Because it is so true no matter how crappy things get there is always someone there who cares about you...
    Whether it be a friend, a family member or your significant other....

  • A Star 1994
    October 16, 2008

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    WOAH I'm going through a rough spot and this really called out to me. I love how it's so general and could apply to anyone. Great job!!!