Take my hand lets go
some were we can rest our souls
we'll sit were it's warm
you say look were here alone
I closed my eyes
as if I were going to sleep
but deep down inside
I knew it was my soul to keep
You fucked me
You fed me
You even bathed me
Because of you
I look in the mirror
and think
God I need a clue
When you said you loved me
I thought you meant it
but then I relized
your nothing but dimented.
You cheated on me with my best friend
And now you are no longer my boy friend
You said you loved me
You fucking lied
and now all you do
is make me cry
Everything you said and done
Just makes me sick till I'm done
You and me are threw
even if it's the last thing I ever do.
A contest entry
- Write about a person. by samantha jean.
600 points, ended October 31, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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It's always sad to be deceived like that and I know from experience. But you deserve someone better and I'm sure you'lll find him.
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"You said you loved me
You fucking lied
and now all you do
is make me cry"
Powerful.
Thank you for the entry in my contest, and good luck!
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