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Growing Old With You

The day is growing dark,
The moon is full and bright,
I just want to be with you,
Let's sit and waste the night.

Together we sit close,
We watch the stars and sky,
My head lain on your lap,
As time is drifting by.

I need you with me here forever,
Growing old with you.
I can’t wait to see where God will take us,
As I grow old with you.

The time goes quickly by,
The months have turned to years.
So many things we’ve seen,
So many smiles and tears.

But still you hold me close,
And still you melt my heart.
Sometimes this love is tough,
But we will never part,

Cause,

I need you with me here forever,
Growing old with me.
I can’t wait to see where God will take us,
As you grow old with me.

Our love is fuller than a fountain,
Filled from up above.
Our love is stronger than a mountain,
With God’s holy love.

I need you with me here forever,
I can’t wait to grow old with you.

Author notes

These are meant to be lyrics, not very good i know, but i am so in love with my fiance that I wanted to write a song about it. This is my first try at writing song lyrics, so go easy on me

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 17, 2008

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    Thank You for Entering

    Awww this is such a beautifully penned poem and you know for taking a stab at lyrical writing you did quite a good job. any ways I do love how you wrote this poem and furthermore really love the over all concept to the poem as wlel. congratulations on your engagement and may God bless you both through out your soon to be married life. good work and good luck


  • WolfHeart
    October 17, 2008

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    Fine lyrics. I love this piece for its romance and hope. I have someone I felt the same way about, so it really touched my heart. Just being together is the most sacred thing.
    Best of luck in the contest.