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New Person

I'm telling the world goodbye
no longer a need to deny

wanting away from it all
especially when I'm feeling so small

take me away from the earth
so i may go through rebirth

to be a better me
i hope you all can see

I'm telling the world goodbye
i will soon have the chance to retry

Author notes

i need to be a better person and heres how i need to do it

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  • lostsouls12
    March 31

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    its always hard to become a new person. to many things get in the way. but it you have the strength you can make it happend


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    March 28
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    By renewing your mind, you become new!
    Great writing Ashlie!