Reminiscing on times gone by,
we smile, inhale and sigh
Cherishing these moments in our hearts,
memories that can’t be torn apart
These bits and pieces in our lives from afar
are precious times that makes us who we are
Author notes
Prompt is: Abstract Moments
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 to 40 words #13 by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful Poem
Oh it is always so nice when we can remember the happy memories other have given us. Hopefully they out number the sad ones that we remember. A very uplifting poem.
Take care.
Sandy
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Brilliant!
I like how you managed to capture
memories of yesterday in this most
enchanting poem. the images are magical
to say the least. Great Job
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Very beautiful...soft and well written...memories past that we wish to change can be done differently in the future...well done...
thank you for entering!
mystic -
I just love the way your writing can relate to so manys thoughts... we always look back at our memories and wish some of the things would be done again... thought provoking write
Cheers
Jen
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My Darling Husband,
Utterly beautiful I agree with the previous comment, could be in a Hallmark card
The picture blends nicely with the words
Best of Luck baby
♥
Stay safe
I Love You, Always
~Manda
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Lovely and poetic
Could be inside a Hallmark card - a truly wonderful entry. Good Luck in the contest
Tang
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