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The frailty of contentment

Slightly wilted, weathered
weeping, longing for just a glimpse,
the smallest, fragmented ray of sunshine.
A sparkle of hope.

Mistake me not
for a creature of bravery.

 


Dejectedly I turn
to once again cower
in the all too familiar shadows.

Caught in your neatly woven web of lies,
wearing my heart on my sleeve.

The colors of joy blending
with the greens and browns of contentment,
to create the grey and black of misery and despair.

 


We watched the seagull's feathers change hues against the rising sun.
We heard the mindless chatter of waves crashing against the shore.

 


Not a word do we speak to mar this dreamland.

 

 



 

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  • Danna Hobart
    October 17, 2008

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    We watched the seagull's feathers change hues against the rising sun.
    We heard the mindless chatter of waves crashing against the shore.

    These lines are absolutely beautiful. Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Trill - Trickle
    October 17, 2008
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    Love it sooo much! Very moving!


  • Trill - Trickle
    October 17, 2008

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    DEEP

    This poem definetely has reality! I love the part where you said 'caught in your neatly woven web of lies' I can really relate to that! I Love How You Put Reality Into ALL Your Poems!!!


    • Angierie
      October 17, 2008
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      haha thanks
      this one is just bits and pieces of some of my poems

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