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Rhythmical Verberations

Rhythmic electricity pulsates
through my veins;
as chills reverberate down my spine,
jump starting my hips into that harmonic melody.
Rhapsodic steps glide on air.

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Prompt: music / dance
25 words

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  • Ylova silver member
    December 10, 2008

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    Wow. This is amzing! An amazing take on the prompt. This sooo should have won Gold! I mean! WOW!

    Keep it flowing.

    Best wishes and much love
    Ylova


  • GypsyEyes
    November 27, 2008

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    ok loving the background!!! this was very well penned and i love all the imagery you put into it! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox


  • Alyzeh
    October 20, 2008

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    This is amazing! Excellent take on the prompt! Good luck in the contest


  • princess Jewelcat22
    October 17, 2008

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    boy sis!!! This is excellent!! I love your details and descriptions!! You truly did a very marvelous job portraying this piece!! I love it!!

  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    Love the title! Excellent word play. This write says so much for 25 words, not an easy thing to do. The imagery and beat to this is great, wicked read. Good luck in your contest

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