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An Abstract Moment in Time

 

 

His image is now captured

 

in this long awaited moment -

 

a transformative agent surrounds

 

mass perceptions, now altered -

 

and the viewer can see that his

 

composition of light resounds.

 

 

Author notes

“I believe this year holds for each and every one of us the very meaning of our lives.” ~ Me

“I believe this night holds for each and every one of us the very meaning of our lives.” ~ Morpheus
 

My quote (top) was inspired by Morpheus (bottom). Italics in bold were added by me.

30 words on how our lives will dramatically change overnight. GO, OBAMA!!

Contest Prompt is: "Abstract Moments. 30 to 40 words please... be creative... color outside those lines..."

 

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  • darell
    October 17, 2008

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    Fascinating

    I like the idea but wonder if you want
    something inspired by Obama or not?

    I will most likely enter later


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    I'm so not into politics. The government scares the crap out of me. The plight of the world scares me to death. BUT, having said that, I think this poem is wonderful! Well done, my beautiful Peace Dove! Good luck in the contest!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    Love you version of the qoute...hope lies in many places and though I truly do not believe one man can change a nation, we as a group can...well put...thank you for entering!
    mystic


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      October 17, 2008
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      Thank you for hosting the contest...

      The truth shall set us free... Thanks again... Peace always, Cyn


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    It seems there are alot of people not just from the States that feel this way. American politics intrigues me. Solid write here.

    Juls

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      October 16, 2008
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      Thank you for dropping in!!

      Hi Juls!! How are you?!? I'm really glad you stopped in tonight for a visit, and to read my work!! And I especially thank you for your thoughtful words of appreciation of this poem!! The American consciousness is now changing like a spinning kaleidoscope... It's about time the wheels of justice are finally turning!! I'll be over your way soon to read your work, as I'm missing your fantastic poetry so much, I'm feeling slightly guilty!! Thanks again for the kudos, you take care & keep smiling!!! Peace & love always, Cyn


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    Oh I like it.

    Go Obama.

    Obama will protect ur momma.

    Seriously, Well writ.

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      October 16, 2008
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      Thank you for the kudos!!!

      I'm really glad you stopped in to read my work!! And I especially thank you for your thoughtful words of appreciation of this poem. The American consciousness is now changing like a spinning kaleidoscope... It's about time those rusty ol' wheels of justice are finally turning!! I'll be over your way soon to read your work, I'm feeling tired & sleepy now, so I'm off to bed. Thanks again for the kudos (and for adding me as a fave), you take care & keep smiling!!! Peace & love always, Cyn


  • oneeye
    October 16, 2008

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    Excellant

    I do not like to profess my political inclinations in any forum. BUT... your words are well put...and very well writen. Thank you Cyn!


  • breedluv gold member
    October 16, 2008
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    You go, girl. Wonderful work and I agree with your premise. Good luck!


  • arafura gold member
    October 16, 2008
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    Brilliant! I love it. Go Obama!!!


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      October 16, 2008
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      Thank you, John!!!

      That's what we say - GO OBAMA!!! Thanks again!!!
      WORLD PEACE Always, Cyn


  • intanglio2ring
    October 16, 2008

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    Excellent

    He's truly our man of hope and change
    A wonderful composition - I wish you much luck in the contest - this is a powerful entry!
    Tang

  • SoulWhispher
    October 16, 2008
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    Well Done

    This should b e a gold winner, you have captured the intent of the contest, great job, blessings John


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      October 16, 2008
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      Thank you for your kudos!!!

      • SoulWhispher
        October 17, 2008

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        May the yellow moon keep shining
        May its light give comfort too
        May it provide a magic spell
        As it shines down on you


        Thanks John, with love


        • Cynthia Gaines gold member
          October 17, 2008
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          Thank you, John!!!

          You've made my day!! You're such a great fan!!
          Peace Always, Cyn


  • trekkergirl
    October 16, 2008
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    oh and I gotta tell you... Obama is my favorite candidate so I really like the picture prompt too.


  • trekkergirl
    October 16, 2008

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    I odn't know about the poem itself but I really do like this title. Fits the prompt extremely well.

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