His image is now captured
in this long awaited moment -
a transformative agent surrounds
mass perceptions, now altered -
and the viewer can see that his
composition of light resounds.
Author notes
“I believe this year holds for each and every one of us the very meaning of our lives.” ~ Me
“I believe this night holds for each and every one of us the very meaning of our lives.” ~ Morpheus
My quote (top) was inspired by Morpheus (bottom). Italics in bold were added by me.
30 words on how our lives will dramatically change overnight. GO, OBAMA!!Contest Prompt is: "Abstract Moments. 30 to 40 words please... be creative... color outside those lines..."
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 to 40 words #13 by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Fascinating
I like the idea but wonder if you want
something inspired by Obama or not?
I will most likely enter later
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I'm so not into politics. The government scares the crap out of me. The plight of the world scares me to death. BUT, having said that, I think this poem is wonderful! Well done, my beautiful Peace Dove! Good luck in the contest!
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Love you version of the qoute...hope lies in many places and though I truly do not believe one man can change a nation, we as a group can...well put...thank you for entering!
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Thank you for hosting the contest...
The truth shall set us free... Thanks again... Peace always, Cyn
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It seems there are alot of people not just from the States that feel this way. American politics intrigues me. Solid write here.
Juls
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Thank you for dropping in!!
Hi Juls!! How are you?!? I'm really glad you stopped in tonight for a visit, and to read my work!! And I especially thank you for your thoughtful words of appreciation of this poem!! The American consciousness is now changing like a spinning kaleidoscope... It's about time the wheels of justice are finally turning!! 
I'll be over your way soon to read your work, as I'm missing your fantastic poetry so much, I'm feeling slightly guilty!! Thanks again for the kudos, you take care & keep smiling!!! Peace & love always, Cyn
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Oh I like it.
Go Obama.
Obama will protect ur momma.
Seriously, Well writ.
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Thank you for the kudos!!!
I'm really glad you stopped in to read my work!! And I especially thank you for your thoughtful words of appreciation of this poem. The American consciousness is now changing like a spinning kaleidoscope... It's about time those rusty ol' wheels of justice are finally turning!! I'll be over your way soon to read your work, I'm feeling tired & sleepy now, so I'm off to bed. Thanks again for the kudos (and for adding me as a fave), you take care & keep smiling!!! Peace & love always, Cyn
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Excellant
I do not like to profess my political inclinations in any forum. BUT... your words are well put...and very well writen. Thank you Cyn!
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Thank you for dropping in!!!
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You go, girl. Wonderful work and I agree with your premise. Good luck!
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Thank you for the kudos!!!
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Brilliant! I love it. Go Obama!!!
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Thank you, John!!!
That's what we say - GO OBAMA!!! Thanks again!!!
WORLD PEACE Always, Cyn
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Excellent
He's truly our man of hope and change
A wonderful composition - I wish you much luck in the contest - this is a powerful entry!
Tang
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Thank YOU, Tang!!!
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Well Done
This should b e a gold winner, you have captured the intent of the contest, great job, blessings John
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Thank you for your kudos!!!
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May the yellow moon keep shining
May its light give comfort too
May it provide a magic spell
As it shines down on you
Thanks John, with love
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Thank you, John!!!
You've made my day!! You're such a great fan!!
Peace Always, Cyn
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oh and I gotta tell you... Obama is my favorite candidate so I really like the picture prompt too.
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Thank you for the kudos!!!!
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I odn't know about the poem itself but I really do like this title. Fits the prompt extremely well.
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